Peer Feedback

Peer Feedback: 

Strengths: 

- 15/18 said I had good - lip-syncing editing. This was effective as it made the video look even better and seemed more helpful to the message of the video. 

- 10/18, said the slow-motion fitted well within the music, which made it more effective. Giving the video a better atmosphere 

- 10/18 said the overall editing was really slick and fitted well within the music. Meaning it made the video look more professional. 

Areas for improvement: 

   

- 4/18 said I needed better lighting. In these two shots they don't look like they go together but they do. So to improve I need to either use a filter to brighten the background or make sure that when I am filming that the weather is the same. 

- 6/18 said that I needed to have a clearer storyline/message. Many suggested that the slow-motion could be built into the storyline making it more effective.

- 8/18 said I needed a bigger variety of camera angles and transitions. Most of the camera angles were long shots and close ups. I could have used other angles to help create the storyline/message better.